Angel of Death

You are an excellent writer, Rory! I was pulled in when I started reading and the title is so simple but it makes you wonder. Your characters are lovely, this ...

For the contest you entered this would be truly worthy of a first place prize but in YWS terms I would really like to know more in the beginning. Now ...

Ok this is really long Esme, but I read up to the part where Lissi fell. I like where you're going with this, but I think maybe a little more ...

This reeks so much emotion that I want to cry but I won't because then I won't be able to tell you how great of a poet you really are. ...

First of all, welcome to YWS. I really love your style in writing, its really beautiful and serene. Sometimes people think that you have to rhyme just to make the ...

I actually read this and I think it has promise. The romance between Haith and Tarses could be elaborated on more, and you could use a little bit more description. ...

Ok its good you added in this chapter because I did feel like I missed a lot. I liked this chapter as always, Keep writing, Angel :D :D :D

Another great chapter and I think I'm in love with Ambrose, please keep writing. The only problem that I have is that you have Chapter four but it also says ...

I haven't cried in a long time Sumi, this is so beautiful. Really, your title is what intrigued me from the beginning but the way you wrote this was like ...

Hey BBB, really haven't talked to you in a while but anyways hey! Now on to this song, I loved it. Since I love music as much as I love ...

This was really beautiful, I hope you get around to adding more to this. I like the emotions you portray, its so sweet. Most guys would be afraid to express ...

This was so beautiful Fallen, I really love where this is going. Its great how you weaved the prologue into the second chapter thus explaining who and what Damian is. ...

I really think this has potential, it just needs a little more. I felt that this was rushed and that maybe you should slow down, give a little bit more ...

Bravo!! I loved your ending and its nice that Calix is getting over Chad and all. You are a really good writer and I really hope you do go for. ...

I only know one person who is reading The Host and since its against the rules in the book Reader 101, they won't tell me what's going on. I'm just ...